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08 January 2019

Not by her own choice

 She was very excited today after-all the schools were re-opening after a long summer break.The streets seem pretty empty most of the days during vacation as everyone is gone somewhere or the other. The number of children in the park decreased. So did the number of vehicles on the street. She always preferred the crowded park and the busy streets, with a lot of children/people hustling and cars honking. The silence seemed haunting and lonely. 
There wasn't much to do for her during the vacations. Her mother passed away a few months back and, she had never seen her father since she was 2 years old. Her step-father didnt bother to look after her or his own child i.e., her little brother. He moved on and left them alone. Her little brother was too young to play with, and the kids she saw in the park, they would never play with her. She found the vacations the laziest and the slowest going. she kept herself busy by doing the household chores and looking after her little brother. 
She would often buy Food on a regular basis and save some as well in the house for later. The little food saved was about to finish, so to save and make that food last longer she would sleep empty stomach sometimes. A lot of nights would go by empty stomach gazing at the night sky, but she made sure her little brother, the only family she was left with, would never have to face starvation. 
The long Summer vacation was finally over and she couldn't be any happier. The parks would soon be full of children and the schools and the streets would be crowded again. Now, once again, she can start selling stationery, snacks and whatever she has to sell for that day, at the traffic signal, near the park, and near the school to well feed the only family she was left with. 



6 comments:

  1. My gosh.god bless u.Its just the matter of time world will recognise ur tallenT.

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    1. Aaawww.... Thank you soooooo much ❤ i need to improve a lot yet...still... Thank you..this means sooo much.. 😘

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  2. I guessed while reading as i had read similar tale earlier but i think it was in Marathi... i hope it is not copied or influenced from original... still little more story building is require.. narration of her background and situation can be improved... rest... keep it up...

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    1. No it is not at all copied... Wtf.. Copied chhod..not even plagiarism is involved.. U may have read..bt i have no idea about such a marathi story.. Infact if i would have known i would've dropped this idea.. I still have a few topics and ideas in progress and now that u mentioned maybe i should check to see if there r already any stories made on those ideas.. Anyway.. I wanted the story to be as short as possible thats why i included only as much details as it would need to tell why she was doing what she was.. I didnt wanted to get into details k why things happened the way they did. I just wanted to show. . inspite of watever shit.. She is looking forward and she has find her own solution rather thn dwelling on the past. And yeah thank you im trying to improve on my grammar and sentence framing but sometimes its just that i feel.. Rather thn being english wise correct like..i dont have the word..bt i just feel.. I wanna right as simple as possible so my readers can relate.. It shouldnt be like they r ready a professional writing with everything in order and correct... I want them to feel nore connected.. Like wen we chat.. We casually write..that way.. I dnt know though....thank you soooo much 💜

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  3. I felt it was incomplete... I expected something more... still it was nice one keep it up take care

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    1. Incomplete? Like the ending kya? Umm thank you.. Nxt time maybe you l like my post... Hehe... Thank you.. U too take care.. 😌

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