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12 December 2018

A Little Flame’s Lesson

Once upon a time, a group of children were camping in the middle of a big, dark forest. After a night filled with stories and laughter, it was finally time for them to head home. They packed up their things and, as one last step, poured the last of their water onto the campfire to put it out. But when the water hit the flames, the fire didn’t go out completely—one tiny spark, a Little Flame, was still glowing, dancing in the dim light.

The Little Flame flickered for a while, crackling gently in the soft breeze. And then, something amazing happened: the Little Flame blinked! Tiny hands and legs began to form, and before long, there stood a bright, curious Little Flame, looking around in wonder at the vast night sky above.

Suddenly, out of nowhere, a scrap of paper floated down and landed near Little Flame. He looked at it curiously, not sure what it was, and tiptoed over to touch it. As soon as he did, the paper caught fire and turned into ashes in seconds! To Little Flame’s surprise, he grew just a bit taller. Delighted, he let out a joyful laugh, his tiny voice echoing through the trees.

As the breeze swept bits of paper, dried leaves, and twigs around the campsite, Little Flame got an idea. He bounced over to every scrap he could find, burning each one with a cheerful sizzle. And every time he burned something, he grew just a bit bigger. The Little Flame was overjoyed—he felt strong, powerful, and more alive than ever!

But in his excitement, Little Flame didn’t notice he was leaving trails of fire behind him. As he wandered through the forest, burning every little thing he could find, he left tiny flames in his wake. By the time he looked back, his eyes went wide with shock—his flames had spread all through the forest, creating a huge fire all around him!

Little Flame, who had been so happy to grow bigger, now felt a deep sadness. He hadn’t meant to hurt the forest; it was his home. Worried and scared, he tried holding his breath, hoping he could shrink back down to his little size, but it was too late. The flames had spread too far. He closed his eyes, shivering, wishing with all his heart that he could make it all go away.

Just then, Little Flame felt something cool and strange tickling his fiery body. He looked up and saw water pouring from the sky, sparkling like tiny stars as it fell. The Fire Brigade had arrived, hoses in hand, sending waves of water splashing down onto the forest. Little Flame felt himself shrinking, smaller and smaller, as each drop hit him with a soft hiss.

Before long, the great fire had been put out, leaving behind only blackened trees and soft piles of ash where the green forest had once stood.

As the last wisps of smoke drifted away, Little Flame was gone, leaving behind a quiet, grey forest and an important lesson that sometimes, even the smallest things can have the biggest impact.

3 comments:

  1. I liked it... its gripping in its storytelling but little let down at the end as it sounds end is abrupt.. though there is a msg in itself could have tried with little twist and turns with its fight and battle for survival against the fire fighters.. and then after lot of survival attempts it looses the battle..

    Its a personal opinion so you can choose to ignore..

    Hehe.. otherwise well done

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  2. Thank you... well the reason for the abrupt ending might be that....... i ran out of ideas! lol :P and wanted to keep it short maybe.. its fire... fire anyway would've extinguished.. hihihi..
    I thought... i really thought maybe i should add some drama, maybe some fighting and the struggle but then i thought.. Our little flame was too naive for it.. he was just born.. unknowingly he grew bigger.. i don't think someone as naive as Little Flame will put up a fight, rather it would just try to end it or maybe just surrender u know..
    I just thought he was too naive and innocent to put up a fight. Baaki nope not gonna ignore your perspective of the story. i can use that in some other story perhaps.. hehe Thank you sooooooo much <3 Keep reading ;) :D

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    1. This comment surpassed the article! Well justified and happy you kept it(the article) that way because yeah I believe people nowadays are rear to find who have a go getter attitude in them not just for love but anything in their life! Everybody kinda wants to get things easily and they would rather adjust they fight for their wants!

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